Tips on maximizing the shock and heartbreak of a betrayal (emphasis on the heartbreak part)? POV char is basically a clone, and has just realized his love interest doesn’t see him as a person; at best he’s something to amuse herself with until she gets bored or has no use for him. She drops all pretenses of caring about him when he calls her on it, not even giving him the dignity of addressing him as a human, but what else can I do? What kind of buildup should there be for maximum pain?

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